Autumn Chill

I experimented with a short form of poetry. Here is three versions from my proverbial scrap book:

Version 1

 Autumn leaves float –

Empty boats adrift on a still loch –

Scavenger birds.

Version 2

Autumnal leaves float

Empty boats upon the Loch

Just scavenger birds

Version 3

Abandoned boats

Autumn leaves

Drift on the loch